by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Mar 29, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
The dice of life we scorned and threw, |
by Melpomene
I found the flow to be amazing and the opening line really caught my attention. I loved this line "May he rape you of your alibi" it was really capturing! This was a brillant read. And im sure an even better write. What more can i say then brillant! ~mel |
by Kurt
Of all your poems i've thus far read this wasn't my favorite. Although i believe it would be unfair of me to say it wasn't as well written. This poem didn't connect with me but was still brilliantly done. Good poetry is good poetry. 5/5. |
by Cherise
"May he rape you of your alibi" |
Nice poem. Keep it up. 5/5 |