I love this...the title dragged me into the poem and by the end of the first stanza I was hooked.
I thought the flow was flawless, the imagery used created vivid pictures and the ending was perfect.

Wow. That was amazing. I loved how this poem was set up. The stanzas seemed well connected and the ending was flippin' brilliant. You are truly a talented poet. Great job. 5/5.

You make my heart itch [with regret.]
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Loved the repetition of this line in the start of each stanza it made the flow beautiful.
I think that the parts you added at the end were realy needed they made the poem seem interesting and full of emotions. The emotion was great the feeling of anger, that really dragged me into it. The imagery was so perfect. Flawless poem! Well done~mel