by aDORKable x3 Mar 29, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Chorus: |
Very nicely written song. The flow of it was good, and I can picture it to music, great Job. |
Wow that was really good...the only part i didnt like was the line...Im on my way to another heartbreak(in the bridge)...leading to the chorus...it doesnt fit very well...unless it does when sung im not sure but...other then that it was really good |
by Stephanie
That was sad, yet wonderfully written! =] The chorus was by far my favorite. & I agree this poem was very unique. Wonderful job, keep it up! 5/5 |
by Jenni Marie
I adore this...so original and creative, and the chourus and first verse had me completely hooked. |