I adore this...so original and creative, and the chourus and first verse had me completely hooked.
You did a wonderful job with this!

That was sad, yet wonderfully written! =] The chorus was by far my favorite. & I agree this poem was very unique. Wonderful job, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Wow that was really good...the only part i didnt like was the line...Im on my way to another heartbreak(in the bridge)...leading to the chorus...it doesnt fit very well...unless it does when sung im not sure but...other then that it was really good

5/5

Very nicely written song. The flow of it was good, and I can picture it to music, great Job.

Although in the Chorus, last line reads, "Where no one'll know my name" and should be, "Where no one will know my name"

Other than that small mistake, great Job.

Peace, Joe