Comments : Only if he knew

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Sometimes I pretend that he cares
    just to make myself smile"

    That line brought back a lot of unwanted memoried but the poem was very emotive and had a lot of good word usage to get the point across
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Skylar

    This is more than a 5 its like a 1000 girl you know how to use words