I really liked this. The flow was clear and smooth, you're effortless rhyme contributing to your beautiful metaphors. Great job, nice write.

I don't understand why this isn't 5.0 ... Because you definitally deserve a 5. Downvoters suck!! Overall I loved this! You did a beautiful job putting your emotions into words, and describing them. Your rhyming was amazing, never was forced. You flow flew beautifully. I loved this part:

If I couldn't be held by you
I'd be sans shelter, in the cold
I might never find my voice and
Just simply do what I'm told

I like that last two lines. Wonderful Job Darlin'!

5/5

Oh my!
How is this not a 5 like Brittney also said. It was a wonderful read. The flow was flawless, the emotions were clear, and the descriptions were amazing. The 3rd stanza was my favorite...so sweet. =] Wonderful job, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

I liked your newest poem. It was really nice. This one is not as nice. The repetition of "If" makes the poem seem messy. What's a "sans shelter"? The reoccuring "I" takes away from your talent. Watch that. That's all I have. Not too bad.

Wonderful poem. The emotion was clear and flow was excellent.
Beatufully poem. 5/5

:Sarah:

Wow again, that was amazing. The description is beautifully written and something i can relate to very much. I absolutely love how you said "If I couldn't taste your tears
So warm in their saltiness
Forever confused I would feel
Wrapped in a shell of loneliness"
lol thats nice. Gave me a newpoint of view I suppose. wow again 5/5 great job!

Awww this is so cute!! I remember what this love felt like and it's wonderful...you did a great job expressing your love!!

Wow i really liked this poem it was quite sweet and amazingly written. The flow was great and the meaning heartfelt. Well done ~mel

That was really really good. You are talented, such a show of emtion. 5/5