Rise above all challenges and all expectations people have for you. now is your time to act.

your servant:
david

Great job on this one. I know there will be many who can relate to your poem

Going to forget
I cants stand a mans touch.
Going to forget
Daddy liked little girls too much

This really tugs at the heart.
Take Care Cindy

You have poured your heart and soul into this write Rebecca.
A piece that pulls on the heart strings.
Take care
Luanne

Rebecca.. that was so sad...
It constricted my heart as i read the stanza's but the last one gave a ray of light.
Hope.
A fitting ending
5/5
*Gem*

Good poem Rebecca, very sad but well written, I am sorry for your loss, be strong and hang in there, things will never be the same like before but it will get better. 5/5

Oh wow.. This was absolutely..amazing.. I have chills running down my spine and tears coming to my eyes. I don't have any other way to express the feeling that I got from this poem other than "tear wrenching". It was beautiful, and the emotion in it was simply overwhelming.

It's tragic... a sad piece of writing. i liked it for the emotions you've showed. well done!

Definately a touching poem, I think we've all got lost in the bottle a time or two looking for help....the reality is it just numbs the pain for a little while. Great job 5/5 GG23

Awe, such sad poem, but beautifully written.
Your words were really heartfelt, and I could feel
the emotions coming out of each line.
The flow was a bit rocky, but the poem was still good.
In the 2nd, 4th, and 6th stanzas..
if the lines were more even, the flow would even out more.
[Just a thought] :] Anyway, great write 5/5