Wow.
That was flat-out amazing! =] Your word usage still amazes me to this day. You always have a way with words. The flow was flawless & overall it was fantastic.

"How many bones would you like to break?
Just because I made a simple mistake
I am not above the golden rule
I'll be damned if I will be your fool"

^ This was by far my favorite stanza. =] Spectacular job writing this one, keep it up. =] 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

I loved it. Your poems never cease to amaze me. Your written word are undescribale in mere words alone. Did tha make sense. Anyway one more time 5/5

I'm jealous you are amazing...please i need tips... hahaha thanks so much for awesome writing Manda

Wow this was powerful. with anger n felt hate on here. i dnt know what to say it was just great. i think one of my favorites. awesome job! keep it up!
truly 5/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy