by Just Lucy Mar 30, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Through all of my lies |
This is really good (: |
Excellent poem and wording was great , the flow was also great , could feel the sadness in this poem , very well written and a pleasure to read, great job , your friend Tracy dean~5/5 |
by Kaila
Woah |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
I enjoyed this poem. the only thing wrong, the last line didnt rhyme with cam. <3 |
by Teria
You did a great job. |