Soldier

This is a really old style i liked it alot though i found it to be effective i havnt seen this since i was younger. Liked how you described what a soilder is to you. Well done ~mel

This is the most different poem i have read i remember doing poems like this umm a couple years ago in school lol but you did a wonderful job on this and a very good idea on the subject you did it on good job:)

keenan

Nice. Very thoughtful of you. not just pretty words either.

That was a pretty cool way of showing what you think about soldiers..

You are very creative =)

Not bad babe