Great poem hun! I can really relate to this one.. I think when someone can't relate to a poem.. making it difficult for them to understand.. they tend to judge harshly.. Not saying that is what I do!! If I don't get it, i don't rate it.. Just saying..
~Tyanna~

I really liked this poem one thing though is the first stanza you ryhmed 'me' with 'me' other then that this was really good. nice to see you've improved alot from this poem to your latest. Good effort here though sweet. ~mel

You write great poems
but if this poem is based on real life i can only predict a bad ending
you should write a poem that is kind of like an answer to this one