by Hidden Feelings within these Words Mar 30, 2007
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Sometimes, I wonder if I'm where I'm supposed to be. |
by TracyM
I really liked this one, really made me think. i used to think the same thing about which way to go. really well written, and good structure. |
by Marcus
This is a good poem |
by Lonesomeme
The meaning or what is perceived on my part, to be the meaning of this poem is a good message. The actual poem itself needs som ework though and it appears to drag on the same idea and becomes redundant. I gave it a 4/5 because it needs a little work , but like I said, the meaning was well taken and with a few changes to it, it could become a great poem. -unattractive1 |
by tyanna
I have a few suggestions for this poem... |