I have a few suggestions for this poem...
The first stanza should be reworded a bit, but I don't really have any suggestions as far as how to do it.. On the 5th stanza you could take "but" out..

"However we add it up and it equals the same" Take out "and"

I think you could've shortened this poem up a little because although it was different sentences and different ways of looking at a situation it kind of repeated itself.. I give this a 3/5.. I do, however, like the meaning of this poem..
~Tyanna~

The meaning or what is perceived on my part, to be the meaning of this poem is a good message. The actual poem itself needs som ework though and it appears to drag on the same idea and becomes redundant. I gave it a 4/5 because it needs a little work , but like I said, the meaning was well taken and with a few changes to it, it could become a great poem. -unattractive1

This is a good poem
I would say I can relate but I'm more of a pessimist and this seems to be an optimistic view

I really liked this one, really made me think. i used to think the same thing about which way to go. really well written, and good structure.