by Hidden Feelings within these Words Mar 30, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
I desperately search for away to reveal my thoughts...My empathy..My problems..and even...my happiness... and yet... |
by Esther
Wow! Good Job Keep the good work up! 5/5, i like this a lot! |
by AlaSkA
Seems to bring to me the idea of being mute on purpose. like fear initialy, but choice after time. |
by Marcus
This poem is really good I can relate to it very much |
by Lonesomeme
Well, some people chose to bite their tongue and let things slide whereas, someof us can not hold our tongue and chose to say what we think. What I took from this poem was that even though the person knew what to do, and how to do it in order to stop this repetetive cycle, it was easier to dont and say nothing. |
by jason
Not your best poem but it is still good = ] |