Is this real...or all lies?

by Hidden Feelings within these Words   Mar 30, 2007


As I sit here and look into your eyes.
I ask myself "Is this real or all lies?"
I desperately want to be loved by you.
Just as I want this to all be true.

Is this a fairy-tale I'm dreaming about?
I want to say it not, but I have many doubts.
I honestly hope I'm not dreaming here.
Dreaming a fairy-tale though, is what I fear.

So, again, I gaze off deep into your eyes.
And ask myself again.."Is this real or all lies?"
You possibly may or may not come to know.
Why I truly care and love you so.

So, once more, I gaze off into your truthful eyes.
And again, ask myself.."Is this real or all lies?"
Now I'm convinced, no matter what I'm going to believe it's real.
And I'm going to attempt to tell you how I feel.

I honestly need to you love and guide me.
But, I'm truly scared of what may happen you see.
You say you love me, and I believe that, that is true.
But there is always that doubt in my mind too.

One thing I do know and one thing I don't doubt.
I do dream of the day I say "I do" and become your wife..
I dream of being yours. Forever and always for the rest of my life.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Nice use of repeation. the flow was excellent, well pinned. a good write and an even better read. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by freedom

    Aww its soo cute..i love how u write all ur poems!! :) but i think that at the end you might want to write another like cuz that part "One thing I do know and one thing I don't doubt" it seems like you just stuck that in there so maybe you can write another line that would go with it but over all it was good! 5/5

    TIFFANY

  • 17 years ago

    by tyanna

    Hey hun! Great poem..one thing I suggest is to take "however" off the last stanza... Great poem though and keep writting..5/5
    Tyanna

  • 17 years ago

    by Julienne

    Like your poem, its fresh and i could relate to it, which i really like, so thank you for posting it! id luv to hav u comment on mine....;) but if you dont want to, thats ok

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