Like your poem, its fresh and i could relate to it, which i really like, so thank you for posting it! id luv to hav u comment on mine....;) but if you dont want to, thats ok

Hey hun! Great poem..one thing I suggest is to take "however" off the last stanza... Great poem though and keep writting..5/5
Tyanna

Aww its soo cute..i love how u write all ur poems!! :) but i think that at the end you might want to write another like cuz that part "One thing I do know and one thing I don't doubt" it seems like you just stuck that in there so maybe you can write another line that would go with it but over all it was good! 5/5

TIFFANY

Nice use of repeation. the flow was excellent, well pinned. a good write and an even better read. 4/5