Sweet holocaust poem, thats a diffferent perpective of the holocaust. I like it

Very powerful writing, and historical as well. I love this poem! One thing that confuses me is the narrator changes from pleased and humored by the victims' distraught, to remorseful and sympathetic. Maybe this was your intention, however, it threw me off slightly. Great writing overall, I love holocaust poetry. I've written one of my own, but this one is stronger and more factual. Congrats on 2nd place in the club contest.

5/5