Wow. I looked for errors and this poem is flawless. It is a slow read, but dispite the speed it is powerful. I enjoyed the meaning and you definitely have a unique style. I would be proud of this poem if i were you.

Good job,

5/5
~Stephen White

Flow was great throughout, the imagery used created vivid pictures for me. The first stanza was a great opening and the poem just kept getting better. Great write!! 5/5

I really liked this it was very powerful from beginning to end, the cadence and rhyming was great! definitely 5/5 keep it up!
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You got such great talent. Keep it up. 5/5

I really love the meaning in this poem and the way the words flow. It's funny how when we're in a relationship everything is perfect and it's all about love & forever. As soon as something goes wrong it's the exact opposite of that - so true great job 5/5

Yet another wonderfully written piece of poetry by you, great Job. I loved it, the flow, the wording, everything about it. You are very talented, keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

Aweh. I take it a lost relationship? Those suck, but you just got to keep your head up Darling and move on, because if he makes you cry in the first place, than he's not worth it. Anyways, I loved this poem, it spoke truth about how it feels to have a broken heart, keep up the great writing.

5/5(:

"Take just one moment...
Hear the sentences you speak,
You think I'm such a strong person,
But your words, they make me weak. "

^^ I loved those lines.

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.

Hey, so omg i loved your poem, it flowed very eaily and even just by the title, it attrached me, and the poem was great on the inside to!

---tara

WOW once again amzingly strong!!! These are the kinds of poems that inspire me! I love how you said that. Not just one part- all of it! You kept it interesting and make it the perfect length. Aswell as making a GREAT point. This kinda reminds me how I felt when I wrote my poem "are you listening?" lol you should check it out. lol i would give you another comment. But dont pay attention to the grammar int hat one, lol that was before I learned about stanzas. Well thanks for the great read. Im adding you to my favorites.

God bless

~skittles

Hm. I liked the repetion within this.

I'm sorry to say, but your poems don't stand out to me and it baffles me why not. Your topics seem a little cliche... May I offer a suggestion and say try to make them about a cliche topic but not written in a cliche way. Make sense?

This wasn't too bad. You had a nice point to it.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 4.5