Don't cry in the darkness of the night,
don't let yourself down tonight,
stand up, you must fight!
and you'll see it'll be allright!

I love to repeating, then the switch from let him be to let me be.
Very great poem.
You're a talented writer.

Excellent work...lovely...n i did'nt find many errors with this one...it flowed perfectly n the choice of words n the style of write was amazing
Good work!
xxPoojaxx

Wow....i felt the emotion pouring on me...the emotion definately there!!! the flow wuz good and the poem was freakin aweseome! a 5/5