Very good Jess...

I want to come see you,
Maybe tomorrow, even today.
Even if you don't want me to
I definitely will anyway.
` I love that stanza .

You are a miracle in yourself
Even though you don't think so.
`Beautiful lines <3

I feel like some of your rhymes were forced, but even so, your poem expressed sweet emotion in a simple, beautifull manner .
..__MiNDYY

The force is strong with this one
awooo

The force is strong with this one
awooo