Secret love at the gym

by linda   Mar 30, 2007


Secret love at the gym...

how hurting it is when u fall in love with someone u don't know
how lovely it is when u think he cares about u.
how stupid it is when u find out that he does not.
how hard it is when u try to forget him.

how annoying it is when you're in love with someone secretly.
how hard it is when u feel like telling him whats in your heart while you cannot.

u feel that u want to shout and say :' just go away and leave me alone! '!
as if he's the one to blame
but the problem is that he has no idea about your feelings.
those strong hidden feelings reflecting cool ones.
it's not because you're showing off
it's because you're a weak girl
weak because of love
because of these warm feelings.
simply, because of him.

u don't dare to look at him ...even normally.
u don't dare to talk to him
u become lost when he's there
u play sports slowly
to have more minutes next to him without improving
all these actions are secrets that you wish to whisper.
but the thing is you're afraid that he won't listen.

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  • 17 years ago

    by silentredeemer

    Aww... it's ok... it's hard. but i think you need to take the risk and tell him...of course, there's a right time for that...good luck!

  • 17 years ago

    by linda

    He rockssssssssssssssssssssssss u guys are all jealous bcz girls are fond of this singer

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    You should try writing proper "you" in poetry. Simple "u" takes the readers focus off of the content of the poem and onto that reoccurring mistake.

    On a content and emotional level - this is a good poem, it explains how you feel and the end was a good ending. But on another level, the flow could use a lot of work, the beginning of each line should have capitals but a lot of writers don't use those, and like I already mentioned, the "u" . But it had a great emotional level to it on the side that he has no idea how you feel and that can hurt, but you should always tell someone how you feel because often hearts get broken from words unspoken.

    Keep writing ma'dear, and keep your head up high.

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