You should try writing proper "you" in poetry. Simple "u" takes the readers focus off of the content of the poem and onto that reoccurring mistake.

On a content and emotional level - this is a good poem, it explains how you feel and the end was a good ending. But on another level, the flow could use a lot of work, the beginning of each line should have capitals but a lot of writers don't use those, and like I already mentioned, the "u" . But it had a great emotional level to it on the side that he has no idea how you feel and that can hurt, but you should always tell someone how you feel because often hearts get broken from words unspoken.

Keep writing ma'dear, and keep your head up high.

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Aww... it's ok... it's hard. but i think you need to take the risk and tell him...of course, there's a right time for that...good luck!