Oh my.
Reading this literally gave me chills.
You're a very talented writer,
and this was beautiful.
5/5
:D

Wow! Excellent job! This really shows the pain of adoption...I am so glad I read this.

A soul was lost to us that day,
so many years ago.
The little girl that we created,
must now be fully grown.
I hope she comes and finds me,
or they tell her where I'm at
Until I see her face to face,
I'll love this photograph.

What a great ending..Very heart wrenching piece.
Take care Cindy

Oh, that was so sad and very well written.
Excellent job.

Omgoodness, I am nearly crying from this. It was amazing and my poem of the day! I just can't believe your beautiful imagery and rhyme and story. You'll win for sure!
Charisma*

Amazing poem.
Heartbreaking, it made me cry.
You're such a wonderful writer.

I'm going to add you my favorites. :]

5/5