Comments : Mortal Wish

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    How can this not have comments??

    "Please give her this my last decree
    "In life and death my love is true""

    That last couplet was so beautiful, yet so bittersweet.
    A talented piece
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Kitten3

    I love this poem too. You are an amazing writer. You are definately one of my favorites.