Aww, this is such a sad poem. things will get better honey xxxxxx

Nicely done.....good job....nice flow...nice wording....nice emotions...."jgog"

I really love this poem. its so deep and meaningful and true. you really express you're theme well. in response to your profile question- about your writer's block - go and so something you love- see some one you have deep feelings for, watch your favorite film, go to your favorite place- or do anything else that makes you feel something strong, ten try to write about it. i find this helps me, hope it helps you. xXx