DFHJS:Df. I just love this poem so much!! It's one of my new favourites! Lol. I love the whole idea of it and how you wrote it. And the last stanza was just brilliant! It reminded me of a quote (I think you wrote it, too)...i can't really remember it but yeah. Amazing write, Sarah! 5/5.

Love ya!

` Glenduh

What a unique poem. I like how every stanza was somewhat different, yet they all tied in together. The shorter phrases you put in brackets also helped the effectiveness of this poem.

Excellent.

Wow, this had a lot of depth. Relee liked it, sooo very different! Like to read more so thats wat ima doo! Love it!
Carissa E>

Wow i really like this poem......great poem..5/5..........check out some of my poems if u would thankz...

I like how you expressed yourself in this poem, with nature and everyday things. Nice poem Sarah =)

I liked this poem a lot. wonderful work. 5/5

~Lizzie~

Sarah this is superb poetry. Ur words are so real and so true. The flow is beautiful and the word selection is pure relevant. Great 5/5

With love
Fsams

Really amazing poem sarah..5.5
the flow was remarkable..=]

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Just being my freaky lovely self... :P... Hope you're having a great safe time vacationing!

All you ahve wrote is a truth. this is life dear. and we all know ups and downs. great writing once again take care 5/5