Sweet & Adorable.

Oh my gosh, simply wonderful to read. The whole time I read it I had a huge smile on my face, I'm sure I looked like an idiot too. Lol. Fantastic. Your wording was amazing & the flow was great too. Keep writing! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

"Together we commited
A beautiful crime
I stole away your heart
And you stole away mine."

I loved this stanza. Nice ryhming, I think thats how you spell it lol but yea its a very cute poem. Great Job

That was beautiful to read. The rhyming was spot on, and the flow was good.

I wish you would have carried on the "thousands" theme throughout every stanza. I liked how in stanzas 1, 2, and 3 you wrote about a thousand words, a thousand kisses and a thousand smiles. Then in stanza 4 you moved the "thousand" part onto the second line, which sort of disrupted the flow a little bit. It was nice seeing it in stanza 5 again, however, you didn't mention it at all in the last stanza. Don't get me wrong, your last stanza was beautiful in itself, but in my opinion, it would have been nice to see that mention of "thousands" again.

Anyway, this poem was still beautiful nonetheless. 5/5.

I love your style, it's so good, you have a great way of writing, and i loved how you expressed how you felt and the way it was. your ah*maz*ing!

5/5...very well written....such raw emotion and all this feeling...it just fills me up...and the flow was fantastic, as well as the wording...love it!!

Oh.Emm.Gee! I love it. The last stanza is one of my FAVORITE quotes of all time!! I really liked this one; full of emotion and sincerity. Great job and thanks for the comment! =]

Ciao

Wow. Very impressive! You have talent.. I loved it.. My favourite part was:

Together we commited
A beautiful crime
I stole away your heart
And you stole away mine.

Great flow, great rhyming, everything is just great. Keep on writing.

Good job.

5/5

Best Of Wishes! :)

Take care

This was really a great poem and one of your best. You really expressed your deep love for this person.
Excellent.

~WOW~ Thats really all I can say.. I loved this poem.. umm Love Criminals! Hope you get sentenced to a lifetime of loving! :) tom

I held my breath when I read the title, because it pre-portrayed the poem as cliche. It was an overused subject, however, I think the purpose of this poem was to be sweet, and lovey-dovey; this is what it was.
There wasn't really anything "new" in the poem, but having said that it was still quite enjoyable to read because of the cute tone and message.
Thanks for sharing.

Great rhythm and tone. A beautiful piece of poetry.
More than a thousand laughs
Wouldn't show how happy you make me
My favourite lines!

Can’t wait to read the next one!

Beautifully penned dedication of love. Nice flow and very sweet. A joy to read.

A great poem. I love it.

Really good poem! i could tell it came from the heart! nice flow... 5/5 ♥ ~ANtoNiA~

Such a beautiful poem. so well conveyed such stunning feelings. wonderful x

Nice work.

Very sweet poem. Though the last stanza was short than the rest, it was my favorite.

That poem was really nice I like the way you wrote it in a way that tells how much you love your other... I love it...

I love this poem its so good!

Amaizing poem, very sweet and very touching and you really put your feelings into it. The last stanza is amamzing, it really hit me.Great work.