My Heart is a Pretzel

by Avrii Monrielle   Mar 30, 2007


My Heart is a Pretzel
Kristi H.
March 30, 2007

My heart is a pretzel, with its twists and turns
Chambers of my heart, which always spin and churn
Locked inside the raptures, with rare, expensive keys
My heart is a pretzel, leading you to me

My heart is a pretzel; it breaks so easily
Another part rips off when you don't talk to me
I wish that it wouldn't, but then, of course, it does
My heart is a pretzel, all because of love

K H

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  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    When i saw the title i actually clicked on this poem cuz i thought it would be funny n a bit weird, but you manage to write about your heart being like a preztel really well lol. it was so sweet and sad and yet really original and flowed so well, well done

  • 17 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hi there :) what an awesome poem!!! I loved the preztel thing. I've never heard that before and i love originality. keep it up kris

    Ruthie