Hi there :) what an awesome poem!!! I loved the preztel thing. I've never heard that before and i love originality. keep it up kris

Ruthie

When i saw the title i actually clicked on this poem cuz i thought it would be funny n a bit weird, but you manage to write about your heart being like a preztel really well lol. it was so sweet and sad and yet really original and flowed so well, well done