5/5 Sounds like baseball!

Nice job. Realistic and reminds me of younger years.........

Such perfect description of an event and circumtances. Superb write.

Way to go Cindy. That will teach ole Bill, won't it. lol. I'm sure he thought he'd stump ya.

Good job.

Always,
Jeannie

Beautifully done my friend! I knew you were up to the challenge. You have great talent and range.

This was great and as a matter of fact, I was out watching the boys play baseball today.
Great job.

Great traditions obscured
by the passing of time.
Purity of our past years
robbed the greatest of crimes.

Sums up the whole piece nicely......very well written. Good imagery, flow and rhyming.

You certainly could write on anything...just anything at all. Loved this piece too. You are simply amazing.

Keep writing dear

all the best and take care

Personally, i don't watch baseball, it might have something to do with the fact, i'm in England and we're fixated on Football.. lol
But all the same, such a cute poem.
And, it still had the deeper meaning within the words while keeping an upbeat tone
5/5
*Gem*