Hey,
Just wanted to thank you for the comment and welcome you to the club! :)
Anyways this is a sad sad poem... I'm perconally bulimic and yeah i know what an ED does to you. Swill break my bones
AND the words will continue to starve me
I want it to stop i want it to end
I want someone to so if you ever, need to talk i'm hear for you k? PM/IM me anytime you like.
Now back to the poem, i thought the structure could of used some work, you had some short lines and some long lines... if you made them all the same length then it would look more temting to read i guess. But i loved the emotion youve displayed so well in this poem. SO yeah an enjoyable read, keep writing!

I htink this stanza;

"Sticks and stones will break my bones
But the words continue to starve me
I want it to stop i want it to end
I want someone to save me... I need a friend"

Should be;

"Sticks and stones will break my bones
And the words continue to starve me
I want it to stop... i want it to end
I need someone to save me... I need a friend..."

Maybe? I odnt know its your poem, but i think itll work better this way.
Take care
xx