When I'm With Thee [Early Modern English]

by BrixGoesxRawr   Mar 31, 2007


Hush -- close thine eyes
Imagine; the beach
Sunrise: pink, orange, yellow
Warm sand, calm waters

Lying upon a blanket, floating on the clouds
Nothing but nature blowing in our ears
Soft breeze running wildly through thy hair
My head floating upon thy chest

Hands exploring thy body's structure
Disappearing into a land of dreams
Colorful sparks flying in the sky
Pink rose petals lay around us

I love who I am, when I'm with thee
Fearless, confident, strong, and brave
Thou puts a spell upon my heart and soul
I love who I am, when I'm with thee

Brianna Carter
March 30, 2007.

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  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Wow very nice poem, loved how you put it in early modern english, very imaginative. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This is so sweet, and you did it in modern old english, i think it was beautiful, it flowed so delicoiously, (sry, i can't spell) 5/5
    gabriella

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