Truly deep. i lov it:)

Hm... that gave me a lot to think about... its too early in the morning for thinking!!! still, brilliant poem. i really liked the last part...

___________
"The person you really need the most is you
and all of your dreams will finally come true. "
___________

so deep. great write!!! 5/5

Allanah

Great job!!
I love it love it love it love it!!!
These lines:

"The person you really need the most is you
and all of your dreams will finally come true. "

They're so beautifully written.

Great poem. As all of your poems, this one had a very good rhyming as well..
Keep up the wonderful work

Best of wishes
Take care

5/5

Hmm. The two middle stanzas need fixing. They just don't sound as good as your usual stanzas. This poem had a nice ending, and was thought provoking.

The person you really need the most is you
and all of your dreams will finally come true.

^^Loved those lines Darien!! This was such a good poem, with so much meaning! Awesome job! 5/5

You did a great job on this poem. well done. 5/5 take care.

~Chelsea

Awh, another great poem. This was very inspirational and made me think. The flow was good except in some parts I felt the rhyme was only chosen becuase it rhymed. The descriptions were great and the emotion was clearr. Great poemm hunn, 5/5

OoOoOo!!! I loved the originality in this poem you give so many examples and make the person really see what your poem is about I liked it!

The person you really need the most is you

I wish more people could get to read this. most of us may know it already. but we keep forgetting it every once in a while. that's sad :(

Great line Darien! :)
Marjan

I love that it was subtle.
I didn't understand anything
Until I read the title
Then it all clicked like Shuh-bang. Lol.
It was very well.
The flow was nice, but not great.
But all in all.
I'll give you a four :]

Thank you sir for thie enjoyable read. Keep up the great talent

I don't like third stanza it somehow doesn't fit but rest of this poem is excellent. Ending is very effective and few lines are really greatly written. I like the topic and this piece has some interesting, original rhythm. Rhyming is good except in last two lines,
you-true is very typical rhyme and it doesn't leaves good impression in your poem.
Anyway I like this one very much, you created great atmosphere in it and expressed your attitude clearly.