It's good, i liked it.
Simple and effective.
daisy x

Very sad,can feel the pain so well through yours words.Your poems are so powerful and intense they take your readers to your world painted by words of true emotions.

Take care
chavii.

Well, my friend, you've done it again. Pulled out those heartstrings and gave them a tug.

"I'm settling back into
Life behind these walls
Hurt fills up my heart
As the darkness calls"

Certainly can relate to those words. Good imagery and flow.

Always,
Jeannie

Oh Mercy Cindy you and Jeannie both have me in tears this morning and it's only 6:45.

I'm settling back into
Life behind these walls
Hurt fills up my heart
As the darkness calls
^^^
Real heart toucher this stanza is.
Take care hun
Have a wonderful weekend!

So sad and very emotional Cindy.
Very well expressed.
Take care.

This is pretty dark indeed, could feel the pain and sadness flowing all over. everytime i read ur poem, i just wish i could be there with u.

keep writing

all the best and take care

Who is doing this to you Cindy?
Cos they deserve a big shake/slap to get some sense into them.
My thoughts and prayers are with you m'dear
5/5 for the amazing poem
*Gem*

Wonderfully rhymed dear cindy

VERY GOOD WRITE MY FRIEND. THIS FEELS LIKE MORE OF A SAD POEM TO ME BUT GOOD ALL THE SAME. BEST WISHES