by geeeeee Mar 31, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
It breeds inside every inch of their hearts |
by hayley
Your right. maybe one day everything will change... for the better. very nicely written. |
"It is in the twinkle of an undeveloped tear |
Hey, thanks, I really appreciate the comment! This is an awesome poem. I like this one the best so far in yours that I've read. keep it up! Peace, Trinity |
by Gem
I'm speechless.. i'm really lost for words.. |
by Alma
I must say you really captured the atmosphere the descriptive language you used truly helped you to capture the moment (big worlds think your so smart lol) though as me and you both know poverty does not only last for a moment a lot of times it's the only thing some children will ever know they are born into it and die becasue of it we must open eyes to understand why it is that so many people all over the world are forced to live like this and stand up and fight against the power and money that pays corupt governments to make peoples lives a living hell. |