Nice poem dealy

Ah. so sad. really well written. loved the last verse.

"Love reaches its peak of extinction,
Fairy tales are just simple fiction"

it sums the whole poem up nicely.

This poem blew me away. makes me think too. i like the flow 5/5

Well, it grabs your attention right from the very first line. Such a beautiful way to start this poem, sets the scene of things to come right from the start.

Wonderful imagery used, really brings the poem to life. Now mix that with a really solid flow, and good use of vocab .. and you have a poem that's readable over and over again.

I really enjoyed this piece, Especially the final stanza. Closes it all up nicely.

Great work.

~Pete.