Very good, yet heartbreaking poem

Really wondeful, good meaning, heartbreakingly beautiful <3

Good poem i liked it. The ryhming slacked just a little but other then that.. it was good.

Doesnt every1..i feel lik tht a lot too...i think tht every1 does at least once in their life....keep on writing and u need more comments or more ppl need to see your work...cuz u got talent...

This was so sad, yet still so good to read.
I really enjoyed the ending, I thought it was very strong and hits hard.
The flow was flawless, the imagery great.

Nicely written, short wish it was a little longer, But overall great poem with good emotion.

Peace, Joe

Hey!! i liked it.... good job says a lot... 5/5