The Pain

by Linden   Mar 31, 2007


The pain, the sacrifice,
The highs and the lows,
Take away what we mean,
Making horrors grow.
Sometimes your dreams,
Don't come up as we plan,
Something goes wrong,
Every thing can.
Run, run, far away,
Never come back,
Push it aside,
Go off the track.
Don't go down that road,
It's the truth down there.
You can't save me now,
It just isn't fair.
I tried, I failed,
Even though I hide.
I'm happy and laughing,
But what is on the inside?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Keath

    Nice poem. It’s overall strong and I like the fact that it’s slightly abstract.
    Though I think it would even read better in stanzas of four lines.

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow very nicely pened, however I would say break it up a bit perhaps into stanzas. Other than that great write.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I love this...the ending was perfect, you have a way with ending your work, you know how to hit the reader's nerve.
    The flow was flawless, the imagery created vivid pictures and I think this was beautifullu written.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Oo kewls..i think it needs more detials or somethin needs to be added to b more drawn in but hey thts just me..good job =)

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    Wonderful... absolutely wonderful...

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