OoOoOoOo...
Me likey.... A Lot!!!
That was so sweet to read! =]
The flow was great & your word usage was superb.

"Make her happy
Make her cry
Tell her secrets
Tell her why"

^ My favorite stanza. So intense for something so short. Wonderful job, keep writing! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Lol kewlies poem short but it made me smile..but luv is way more complicated than a card game...good poem!

I liked this.
I thought it was sweet and though it was short, it was filled with emotion.
Beautiful work!