Whoa lol the end shocked me but it was an overall good poem... i liked it..

"So if you wont do me a simple favor,
then i guess I'll have to find a knife."

I like this poem a lot but I don't like the very last line about the knife. It sounded kind of like you just threw it in.

Don't get me wrong, I think it is a really good poem. Keep it up. 5/5

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Jackie Marie

I like this a lot! 5/5 Also I saw your post and I hope you will accept me as a friend. I could really use one.

Deeply Penned, each word was bursting with emotion.

5/5

Elaine

Woowwwww..so going on my favorates. great emotion. you write from your soul.

This is good poetry from the heart and soul.

Wow... how dark but I guess that's the point. =/ kudos!! ^_^

I really relate to all of ur poems....i love reading them and this one was especially good.....i loved the last two lines.........it was like the anger and frustration were so clear and alive when i read it........perfect.....keep writing.....i enjoy reading them!!