What Went Wrong?

by MizFresh15   Mar 31, 2007


What went wrong
you don't love me like you used to
went went wrong?
was it me or was it you?

i think about you everyday
i thought our love was here to stay
what happened to what used to be?
what happened to you and me?

you're no longer mine
you've found another girl
i thought you really loved me
that you'd give me the world

now that we've grown apart
there's so much hurt in my heart
i'm saying this one thing, it really is true
i love you, i love you i do

it makes me ask a question
what didn't i do right?
we always got along
we never did fight

what went wrong?
you don't love me like you used to
what went wrong
was it me or was it you?

(C) 2007 Elina McGill

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chrissie

    That is a really good poem. It reminded me about my ex..*sigh*...thanks for the comment. Keep up the awesome work. Lots of love, Xx Chrissie

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Booh

    It is good.

  • 17 years ago

    by MizFresh15

    I wrote this poem while thinking of a boyfriend i broke up with but still missing and wondering why i broke up with him. i'm not really good at poetry and just starting to get into the flow of it, but i think it's o.k. for starters!

  • 17 years ago

    by Amor s

    Nice poem! i like it!

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