Comments : Betrayed (Bigger and Longer)

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I love this! You have a better way of letting out feelings more than I do! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Quite a chilling read actually.
    It's sad that the world has turned out this way and trusting someone has become so hard to do..
    But it's a wonderful piece, you clearly spent a lot of time on it
    So well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by rocker666chick

    I know what you are feeling it's happened to me before but....I luved it!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    This really conveys the feelings that come along with being hurt and betrayed. It's overwhelming when the one person you trusted most does something terrible to you. Amazing write. I know I can certainly relate :)

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.