Look

by StormyStar   Mar 31, 2007


I look at you so happy with her
my eyes fill with tears and its all just a blur
that day i when home and cried
the pain i have hurt so much i almost died

what feelings i have for you
i only wish you knew
i wish i could look in your brown eyes
and act so Innocent and know, only lies

you look at me with love in your eyes
the pain and love i have is all that hides
put your arms around me and hold me tight
i see her close she's ready to fight

don't lemme go just don't look
the trouble will pass just like in those books
she doesn't care she won't yell
she doesn't love you can't you tell?

the look in your eyes when shes around
is nothing compared when we're sitting down
i can't do anything when you not near
i want you with me i need you here

look at the difference between her and me
we could last and together we'd be
i love you so much if only you knew
the feelings i have a so real because

I LOVE YOU!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Wow it seems as though you are describing my situation and my life at the present moment. Love hurts when it cuts deeply; however, those brief moments of happiness keeps us coming back for more.

    --Sher

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina Yap

    WOW, im not a fan of rhyming poems but this one is just perfect. i love it, i love it lol i love it. i was in this situation before and its just sad feeling like that, damn 5/5 girl

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    A good poem, with good flow and rhyme. very sweet imagery. A very sweet poem.
    well done
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    I love this poem, it was great, the flow was great the structure was perfect, and i couldn't find nething wrong with it, 5/5

    I look at you so happy with her
    my eyes fill with tears and its all just a blur
    that day i when home and cried
    the pain i have hurt so much i almost died

    my fave lines^^

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    This is so sweet and of course kind of sad. I agree with ^^^. Just the grammer mistakes.

    look at the difference between her and me
    we could last and together we'd be

    My fave lines ^^^

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