Wow,
You truly are an amazing friend, to have written this for someone. It's truly sad though at the same time. (The poem. lol) The flow was flawless & the emotions were very strong, keep writing! =] 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Well, I can't say I'm insulted, I'm pretty much an atheist too. But I think it's very sweet that you wrote this for your friend, she is very lucky to know someone as caring as you. 5/5, you truly deserve it.

Also, thank you SO much for the lovely comments on my work, I truly appreciate it.

Whether you're an athiest or not, God always hears an honest, self-less prayer. And I'm sure He's heard yours, whether you believe or not....even if it's just this once. As for the poem...it was amazing. Flawless. Such a heartfelt piece coming from a true friend. I love every line of it. Keep writing, love! Take care. 5/5

` Glenduh. =]

This is so kind of you to write this for your friend, and i hope she is okay, even if god didn't get it, with such a beautiful poem she would have to feel better, yes, the flow was beautiful, and it was so sweet... 5/5
gabriella

That was a very nice poem, and things we would all ask for. There was something about this poem I didn't like, but it is a very biased opinion. Asking God for so many things, yet you do not thank him for the things you have. I know it's just a poem, and I really like the poem, but outside of the poem, I think you should think about thanking him. Maybe your next poem you can write about the great things God has done for you? Great job on this though. Good to see people writing about their faith.

That's kinda odd that you would write a poem like that if you dont believe in God but hey its a good write :) 5.5
thx for rrc on my poem it means alot :)

take care and that's amazing that you care for your friends like that

I do like this poem, but it should be about the belief, not a story persay. but i will keep it in the contest(you have a spot) but if you would, a replacement could earn you a better chance of winning. If you want to change(or do change) it please say so, and please Title and number your poem.

Thanks!

Prayer Poems are so beautiful to read, especially coming from a faith filled Atheist, I mean no offense, I am just amazed at how your Spirit was filled to write for a friend. All prayers are answered but not always the way we wish them to be. Your poem is outstanding. Shalom HaBarucha

This poem is amazing...its great that someone can be such a good friend and write a poem like this..excellent job!

~michelle~