Anyone else think this sounds like one of those deformed old storytellers from carnivals narrating this poem. I thought that as I was writing it. I couldn't stop saying it in a wispy, maniacal voice...

Just like "Just Another", I had no real conscious reason for writing this. This time it was roughly 1:20am.

Those of you who have read xALittleBitDramaticx's work may notice a reference to one of her pieces in stanza 7. Also, avid reader's of famous romantic poetry may notice a line similar to William Blake's "Nurse's Song" re his "songs of Innocence and Experience". This is also in stanza 7.

As always, I greatly appreciate any words of advice!

HxR

Wow.. you really have a gift... ya i do agree it does sound like one of those deformed storytellers but i think that is what attracts me to it... the way is was written was strong,and passionate, your work i really like. :-)

Lovely! 5/5