Im not really sure at what you were getting at..but it was really good =D

5/5

Very nicely written Villanelle. The flow and the rhymes where good. I liked your choice of words as well. Great Job.

Peace, Joe

Very good poem, nice work I really enjoyed it.

PS. Plz rate and comment on my poems and I'll return the favour.

Very good :) I havent come across this type of rhyming/poetry writing before. Would like to know more about it. Come read my poems if you like.

Awe that was sad, but it really called out to me at the same time, I loved it! Keep it up hunn, you are amazing. Teehee.

heartchuu.