Its really good! i like it...im not really sure of what to say for this one
5/5

Kewls! u lik writing with song titles dont cha..this is a very good one..ryhiming was good flow was good liked it =)

Very nicely written, the flow and structure was great. I loved your rhyming scheme and choice of words as well. Yet another great poem. You have talent, keep it up.

Peace, Joe

I liked this, especially the ending. Your flow was consistent throughout the entire poem and the rhyming was spot on. I liked how you used punctuation in this, too, which helped your flow a lot.

Nice work. Keep it up.

Aweh I really liked this one, it explained how half of my friends are with boys haha, some girls just really don't know what they are doing; do they? Haha, anyways, dear Ciao...I freaking adored this poem, just like all of your other ones haha.

heartchuu.

Omg !! this is so like wow, i cant believe that this is of this qaulity hun loved it :D

xxx alex xxx