Tears in the rain

by my name is Llama   Apr 1, 2007


She lived a lonely life
She was always by herself
Yet she achieved so much

I wish i had given her the time
The time to get to know her better
To listen and learn everything she had discovered

Her eyes told a story of great adventure and wealth
Of seeing places one could never imagine
Of meeting people who knew so much

No one ever took the time to sit with her
To hear her and just find out more
To makes sure what she knew carried on

And so all her experiences will be lost
Like tears in the rain

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  • 17 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    A descriptive type of poem yet it holds loneliness and pain in every words that you unleashed and let go. good job! but i think u can give more than this.

  • 17 years ago

    by kittykat0232

    Awwwww its so sad!! has a lot of meaning though, i loved it! 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    Such a deep poem. I loved reading it. 5/5

    ~ Tina