Wow..another great job hun..The rhyming was perfect and the flow was flawless..I really liked the first and last stanza.."so let's be nothing, I heard that last forever" was my favorite. Wonderful job beginning and ending the poem..5/5

I loved this poem. I know just how feel:) It is great. Keep doing what you are doing:)
5/5

And when I need guidance to set me strait

strait should be straight.

Awe, the last stanza is really cute. The poem was alright, I really liked the last stanza.

Wow!!....very touching n deep write!...perfect rhyme scheme...i love the first n the last stanza...filled wth beaty n emotions...ver good job!
xxPoojaxx

This is a very cute poem with a great rhyme scheme. The content relects the object of affection is most worthy.

This was was awesome. my fave stanza in this one=
You tell me that I'm beautiful
Even if I strongly disagree
You've found the beauty and perfection
That I'm just too stubborn to see

it is so true with girls. give them compliments and they always say bad stuff to put themselves down (well i do) but it was awesome. the structure was great and over all, i just loved it. 5/5

Hey,
wow an awesome poem, the rhyming and the flow are great.. the first and the last stanza are my favorite, I can kind of relate to it, my boyfriend is like that, I can tell him everything without thinking twice..I so love him, well back to the poem, I like the title, when I read that, I thought it was about a whole different subject. its a great write and it definitely deserves a 5/5!
kisses stephanie

You really explained what love is and your words were powerful although they are simple

My fave lines should be;

At times you make me mad
But then you always make it right
A simple joke or apology
And the urge to smile is tough to fight

Keep it up,
Laura

I liked the ending parts better than the begining ones but that is probably because I was distracted by some grammar and puncuation mistakes. They're pretty easy to point out so you could just reread it. I'll give it a four.

The ending i loed it it makes the whole poem tie together so smoothly! keep it up 5/5

Omg this poem nearly made me cry
it like describes the EXACT feelings i had for my best friend
the lines
'Its amazing how you make me laugh
When it hurts too much to smile'
Is how i used to describe my best friend as well

but yea i made that stupid mistake of being with him...nd then he broke up with me, nd i still love him...nd yea i now understand wat ppl mean wen they say not to date your best friend

it hurts me to be around him cause i still love him so were not as close but the thought of losing him as a friend, as u described feels like a hundred stubbing knives

no words can descibe how much i love this poem
its excellent

5/5!!!!!

xxx

"Its amazing how you make me laugh
When it hurts too much to smile
And when I need guidance to set me strait
Its always your number I dial"

-- In the first & fourth line, "its" needs an apostrophe. In the third line, "strait" should be "straight".

"I can tell you anything
Without even thinking twice
You'll keep my secrets safe
And If needed you'll give me advice"

-- In the fourth line, "if" should not be capitalized.

"At times you make me mad
But then you always make it right
A simple joke or apology
And the urge to smile is tough to fight"

-- I really like this stanza, because I feel it describes my relationship with my best friend. We've told each other that we love one another, but I think we both get on each others nerves a bit. Haha.

"You'd do anything for me
And for you Id do the same
Even if you don't feel the same for me
My love is yours to claim"

-- In the second line, "Id" needs an apostrophe. Also, I think you should make a change in the third line, since you repeat "the same".

"You tell me that I'm beautiful
Even if I strongly disagree
You've found the beauty and perfection
That I'm just too stubborn to see"

-- Aw! I loved this. It's written amazinglyy!

"Some people say we should be a couple
But then every thing would change
No longer would we be best friends
And one fight could set us astray"

-- This is really good. I like the emotion coming from it.

"The thought of losing you
Is like a hundred stabbing knives
If you ever went away
I don't think I could survive"

-- Hm. I liked this, too. I like that it's real and honest. You'd be heartbroken and devastated if you lost this guy.

"Thats why I refuse
The thought of being together
So lets be nothing
I heard it lasts forever <3"

-- In the first line, "Thats" should be "That's". Also, I like that it doesn't end with the two people together, like most love poems. It's a nice change of pace. Good job.

Five out of five. [5/5]

``Briana

Again, this was so good, i loved it.
I feel something when i read your poems, as though i am your thoughts, if that makes sense.
wow
love Tara-Kay

"It's amazing how you make me laugh
When it hurts too much to smile
And when I need guidance to set me straight
It's always your number I dial"

The flow seems to be of for me on the last line...unless it's just the way I'm reading it as the other three lines flow perfectly.

"I can tell you anything
Without even thinking twice
You'll keep my secrets safe
And If needed you'll give me advice

At times you make me mad
But then you always make it right
A simple joke or apology
And the urge to smile is tough to fight"

^^ I like these, the emotion is well felt here, you show that you really care for the person you're writing about and it makes me smile =)

"That's why I refuse
The thought of being together
So lets be nothing..
I heard it lasts forever <3 "

^^ I LOVE LOVE LOVE this closing.
So many people are always writing about the fact they were promised forever and it didn't happen, and you manage to turn that into something positive so beautifully and effortlessly here.

How the h3ll have I missed your work all the time I've been on this site?

Added to favourites, definetly.

2nd stanza
"Without even thinking twice"
take "even" out it makes it sounde better.

I liked this poem. I can relate to it. Changing some of the wording would help with the flow.
5/5

Okay, nothing really to say about this, other than it is once again a well written poem.

SOOO instead of searching for pointless criticism in a good poem, I am going to give you advice on your writing style.

Things I believe you should do:

1. Stop putting spaces between commas/periods and words!!!!!!!!!!!! hahah

2. Change it up some. I feel like I'm reading the same poems over and over. Although they are good, they are also about the same thing. I'm assuming a boy, unless you are gay...But seriously, broaden your topics. Experiment, write about something new!!

3. Change up the rhyming schemes. While this may be confusing to you at first, once you've mastered more styles of poems, the possibilities are endless. I'm like you, i prefer one style and one style alone. BUT when you learn the others, it really is wonderful. Just knowing that you can write your thoughts down in any form is extremely gratifying, plus you will feel like a literary genius. =D

That's really all. I like your poems, they really are the work of the modern poet. Which I feel society needs to respect. I mean come on, this isn't 1608, it's 2008 lol.

Good work, keep writing, and growing. I hope I helped some.

-Aus10

Great poem. Good work. I can relate. Keep it up.

Wow! This poem hit me like a ton of bricks. I have been searching for a poem that describes my feelings. Well done, thank you! (5/5)

Wooot! I have not much to say about this one.. the last line was perfect.. and tied in perfectly with your poem here. I loved that quote and I was quite happy to see you inserted it at the end.. it was perfectly donee (:

5/5

I reallly love this poem, and can relate to it quite well