by Lady Nik
OMG this poem is so sweet i loved it. you are so gifted, keep up the awesome work shanik |
Very sweet I enjoyed it. Correction: The only thing they *alow yyou too* |
This is such a good poem i realy like this stanza |
by Tara Kay
I loved this, reminds me of something id write and maybe already have. |
by Katie
Thi sis so wonderful! There's only a couple spelling errors. "The only thing they alow yyou" should be fixed but other than that it's great! |
by Sumit Ojha
This is a very great! poem, it's short but very true and sweet. (5/5) |
Oh Wow!! the last few lines were completly amazing. i actually havent thought bout that. my bestf are Mi angels. chicka u made me think. n well im smiling n i needed that. i thank you for that. this is completly one of my favorite from yours. this piece was beautiful from beginning to the very end. |
by Mr Rhee
A wonderful write. Sweet, and true. Wonderful feelings within this one. Thanks. |